Insane

Manic 

Ecstatic

Dramatic

Self-Esteem

Self-Indulgent

Extreme Highs

Deafening Lows

Bounce off the walls

Scream at the ground

We rocket

We burn

Freedom

Gone

Reviews

[Kenneth Stephen Goodpas..]

A poetry describing the intense feelings of the Manic-Depressive, I assume? It is unique but not something I would read to indulge myself in to enjoy as a literary work. It lacks form, but it does incite personal feeling which I can have acclaim for, possibly due to a personal affinity.

[Kenneth Stephen Goodpaster]

I been hospitalized and diagnosed s bipolar so I do understand your topic, :)

[creativequill]

hit the nail on the head, I'm bipolar and manic- depressive and more so just felt like I needed to write something about the extremes I go through, it wasn't my strongest work but it was therapeutic in a way to write about it, thanks for stopping and reading :)

[skyelight]

Wow. This is like scream-your-butt-off honestly intense. It's so in the moment then gone. I love how you used the color for a dramatic effect and the lack of wording for emphasis.

[creativequill]

Thank you very much for the wonderful review :)

[skyelight]

Anytime! :)

[creativequill]

:)

[ms. barrie]

The fiery, honest emotions depicted in this poem, the imagery of explosive emotions spilling forth like lava, such simplicity captured, makes this a brilliant write. thanks for sharing

[creativequill]

Thank you for reading :)

[ms. barrie]

you are verily welcome :)

[icelandicblue]

I like this firework of a poem. It aptly captures the highs and lows that plague us while we wait for the clouds to part and for some relief. Nicely done.

[creativequill]

thank you very much :)

[Distant horizons]

The feeling of the extreme highs and more extreme lows captured perfectly in so few words. Sometimes, all we can do is wait and hope for the darkness to lift, hopefully sooner than later.

[creativequill]

That's very true, thank you for reading :)

[KeeD]

Haha wow :D what a way to describe the feeling of being or going Insane :) I love the color choice I'm not sure if there's a background story to that :P but yeah really it's like the anthem of the unstable, spoken word! Loved it :)

[creativequill]

i'm manic depressive, and bipolar, and i'm having a little of a chaotic night is all :) thank you, glad you liked it!

[KeeD]

Let's drink to that :) life throws chaotic nights at us all the time, but look at you showing life the middle finger and creating this amazing piece. Kudos.

[creativequill]

haha i am drinking to that ;) thanks a ton keegan always love when you weigh in