Don't Break Her Heart

She stood on the edge of the salt sprayed cliff

Wind whipping her hair and dress into the stormy sky

And I begged her not to jump

Her eyes shot daggers right through me

And baby if looks could kill I'd be dead a thousand times

The words hit me in tidal waves

How I broke her heart

The way she put the knife in my hand

Then she beckoned me closer

Hoping to save her I approached

Then I got that final blow

The look that said it all

She grinned

As she watched me fall

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit its dark but yet profound and gripping till the end.

[creativequill]

I write a lot of the dark stuff, write what ya know right?? Glad it intrigued you :)

[Distant horizons]

Great twist. Brings to mind the saying there is nothing more dangerous than a woman scorned :-)

[creativequill]

Oh there is not, I'm openly bisexual, but I haven't dated any women for a little while because we indeed can bring a storm down when we are upset and its a little scary haha

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[The Nude Writer]

Like..woah. Good stuff. :) deff didnt see that coming :)

[creativequill]

haha I'm gonna make it my mission to say like woah to at least five people today :) it made me laugh, thank you, glad you liked it

[The Nude Writer]

:) look at me.. Im a trend setter ;)

[creativequill]

superstar! haha

[Toni]

Wow, that was very different, I have to agree, what an interesting twist it was, but it was a very good twist, very good job c:

[creativequill]

thank you :)

[Toni]

Anytime

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow what an interesting twist! How good this was.

[creativequill]

thank you much :)