savior

This is my strength to the weak
This is my wealth to the poor
This is my light for the dark
This is my sympathy for the hurt
A cry from the heart, a call in the night
All of me is a thread from your soul
This is my mourning for the dead
This is my support for your fear
This is my dagger for the cruel
This is my mind bound eternally by the vines of vanishing hope
When all else fails
And you're left alone with small traces of sanity
Remember
I'm with you until the end

Reviews

[Muse]

Yes...because we are all of these things..they must take us or leave us. Humans...we are beautiful and ugly creatures. But it's our gift of love that needs to be shared. Well spoken.

[creativequill]

thank you :)

[clairekeown25]

beautiful, if everybody thought like this we would live in a truly beautiful world

[creativequill]

thank you :)

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful, cool light to this piece. Nicely done.

[creativequill]

thank you

[Eric Cox]

you're welcome

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I can feel the empathy in this, I like the concept of opposite and this was a wonderful experiment in that. You sound like a supportive person!

[creativequill]

i try to be to all my friends, and then some, thank you for the kind words

[KeeD]

This speaks volumes of truth and makes one belief in whatever medium they can relate this to. Great write, very poetic, footsteps echo as I walk, I some how don't feel so alone anymore.

[creativequill]

Thank you for your kind words :) nobody should ever feel alone

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

A powerful and strong piece. I love the way you ended it.
"When all else fails
And you're left alone with small traces of sanity
Remember
I'm with you until the end"
Look forward to more of your writing :)

[creativequill]

Thank you :) the end waa my favorite part in it I think glad you liked it