forever

The ghost woman could never love
And the mans rose in hand grew dark through the night
Day after day
Gentle clouds trace the ocean sky
The forever waiting continues
And the final petal falls
The heart breaks

Reviews

[TJ]

A hauntingly beautiful piece that stirs the heart.

[creativequill]

that was the intention, thank you

[Chris]

Some "settle" too soon... others lose their forevers by changing the one that held them.

[creativequill]

very true, and some lose their life waiting for someone who can never love them back

[Chris]

There is a lot of fear of being alone... many never learn how to live with themselves.

[creativequill]

i think that it's very important to learn to live alone, I've had time to adjust to that and I've found that I prefer things in my home by myself, I don't think people fully discover themselves until they've lived alone for awhile, how can you expect someone else to live with you if you don't know how to do that yourself?

[Chris]

Very thoughfully spoken...