smoke and glass

You were a whisper
With a dream
A ghost
Breathing silent screams

You made me whole
Then broke me down
My pieces jagged
Fragile now

Reviews

[TJ]

An eloquent piece of writing that really moves the reader. It is short but this seems to work. Love it!

[creativequill]

thank you :)

[Silent_S C R I P T]

Short and sweet. Wonderfully relate-able. Intense imagery paired with equally intense wording. I really enjoy this poem.

[creativequill]

Thank you :)

[Amanda Granger]

Beautiful, heartfelt, and heart-breaking. Short and sweet with really moving images, a poem I could really feel as I read it. I really like it. :)

[creativequill]

Thank you very much :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

sad but gripping in its silent intensity your words:)

[creativequill]

It didn't feel complete but I felt adding more might take away from the impact so I'm stuck and it's bugging me but thank you

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

its perfect and i love it!

[creativequill]

Thank you :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes