Love & Hurt

Love & Hurt

A Poem by creativekat
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Curiousity of ones feelings about being left by someone they need.

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     What will i do when the only one i love really does leave ? Will i sit in the corner and cry , or will we just get over and only be friends ? Or shall i live lonely and die in pain ? Shall i forgive and forget . For i really do love him so . For he helped me find my heart and identity. He is lots of things Hope,Help,Care,and Fortunately love , but i never ecspected him to be the cause of all my pain. There for i shall love him till the end. To me he is a tornado full of endless twists and suspence , That will eventually one day catch me by surprise . But ... he was made just for me.

© 2010 creativekat


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creativekat
i need to know if this poem is any good : )

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this is good. well penned :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


very emotional

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's really good.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 30, 2010
Last Updated on July 30, 2010
Tags: Love, Hurt, Pain, Hope, Care, Help, Curiousity

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I am 18 years, each day i am alive i learn to love each day i have here even more.I wake up each day looking for something to improve .I want to be something much bigger than myself.The people in.. more..

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