Afterschool

It just describes me afterschool

She lets out a sigh and combs her hair back from the wind 

As she finally meets another school days end 

She pulls out her journal as she takes a seat 

Puts her pen to the paper to let her thoughts flow free

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

I got the vision of a juice container coming home from school, taking off it's lid letting that fresh seal pop sound, letting off the days pressures and then turning itself over and pour juice into a cup with the word journal written on it.

Simple and fluid. Thanks for sharing!
- Aaron

[Jennifer Cullum]

Thank you for your input it was insightful!