mine

the lights of the lamp

are sparkling

in the hot humid air around my bed

and in your deep brown eyes.

Reviews

[razormuse]

Short & sweet..yet none the less meaningful.

[Abbie]

you could make this a little longer and explain whos deep brown eyes your talking about.



100/100

[Undying Glory]

short and very cool work, such beauty in everywhere that we do not see. this was very insightful of you, really liked this one. nice work!

[Jami Nicole]

This is beautiful for being so short. I love it. :)

[Ruth]

I love this :)
Short and poignant, all things of the nature of beauty swarming in the eyes, stunning xx