tears

tears

A Poem by ghost writer

they trickle down your face

wet rivers of sorrow

the fear of tomorrow,

facing it alone.

 

they flow down your cheeks

cumulative pain

pent up from

weeks of suppressed anger.

 

they drip off your chin

leaving a moist trail on your skin

like a snail

carrying its heavy burden

 

they start in the eyes,

deep brown

and end with

a sigh

 

plop.

© 2010 ghost writer


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. i didn't really see the humour ... i saw the melancholy and the melody and the skill that went into writing this ... beautifully written ... with a magical sensitivity ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


riveting in its ability to touch so many sensations while remaining candid.. like the previous reviewer said, it even has hints of humor..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha! I know its emotional and all, but this poem made me laugh. Seriously, the word 'plop' was awesome!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 12, 2010
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ghost writer

singapore, singpore(duh), Singapore



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i am singaporean, about 168-170 cm tall, i look really nerdy, and am omitted/ teased about most stuff, and am totally clueless about 80% of the time. i love the following bands linkin park, daugh.. more..

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