lost love

haiku again.

breath of trees that bend in wind,

whispering willows

forever gone from my eyes.

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

yep, this is a great haiku. good job man, this is really nice

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful. Great choice of words. And it expresses so nicely. I luv it!

[Ruth]

Absolutely breath taking! Wonderful love! Each line perfect with the next!
xx