smouldering eyes.

it's a compilation of haiku's about love that i did in school today. bored, you see.

smouldering eyes, pierce my night,

dark red lips connect

passion between two lovers.

 

sakura blooms, amazing

sweet cherry fruit sings.

wind blows through the willow tree.

 

i see your eyes, bright, dark brown

the eyes of passion

i hold you, and feel your heart.

 

the loud beating of war drums,

your heart beat thrums, fast.

as we kiss under the moon

 

silver moon, burning so bright

an orb in the sky

watching, waiting,observing.

 

silent reverie fills us

not what we should be

but what we are becoming

 

you leave first, to your family

your silhouette, it

dances in moonlight.

 

i lie on my straw futon,

rolling up the sheets,

wishing you were here with me.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Love put elegantly like this is beautiful :)
Clever structure, great work :)
Each line leads into the next image really well
Wonderful
xx

[Undying Glory]

great work man, i love all of these. personally the last 4 were the best. awesome