buzz

buzz

A Poem by Sarah Emily

        buzz

flies go buzz

© 2008 Sarah Emily


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buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... :)
i don't like flies, they are terribly annoying, but bees are nice and they can go buzzzzzz also!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sarah! Not to stifle your creativity, but I think that you can do a little more with this . . . let your imagination loose.



Posted 16 Years Ago


This is short, sweet, and to the point. You bring a very clear picture to my mind with just a few words. Nicely done, Sarah.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2008

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Sarah Emily
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I am Emily's daughter. I am ten years old and in the 5th grade. I love horses and reading and history. I love to read poetry and books. Create your own visitor map! more..

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