Together

it has one bad word in it.

Four years together we havve been as tight as two peas in a pod.

Not a thing was off limits the things we said to each other.

We know what makes each tick.

I was their when you wer cryed uncontrallble.

You feel sperical when i came to you crying ans when i pourd my soul to you.

I feel like we are going to be friends forever.

Well, about that, I now think that's not going to happen.

Why, because you changed.

You did't do it on your own because you had some help.

You've change for the wost now i can't trust you.

Ifell like i can't talk to you. i feel you don't cadre.

You only care about yourself and your parter.

 I can't take it anymore. I GIVE UP!

If you don't chang back, this friendship is OVER.

I'm goging to do like a banana peal and spilt out your life forever.

I'm not going to put my feeling out their so you can just hurt me with your insencetive a*s

Forget it i don't change.I don't need you anymore. Don't write me or call me.  

Reviews

[britbrat902]

So deep and emotional. Really good poem!

the last line is quite definate and powerful- you should stick with that, however, can I just make a recommendation that you change the banana peel part? It's a great metaphor and I'd adivse you to go back ot it sometime, it's just that it's supposed to be an argumentative piece and bananas don't tend to be that menacing- other than that though great work! :) well done! :) xx

[sara!]

wow, i am going through the same thing right now...so true

[phantom]

Ya that reminds me of myself and an ex-friend. A word of advice you can use spell check.