Beautiful Sadness

BEAUTIFUL SADNESS

Oh beautiful sadness, my dark paradise.

I spent my life wishing you away,

But now, I beg for you to stay,

For I see what you mean to me.

Like my mothers touch on a dreary night,

That warmed my heart, and made me cry.

You come by at forlorn times,

Reminding me that I am alive.

Author's Note

Hey!
Happy new year everyone.
Will be on and off this whole month too.
A little scribble to remind you all that i still exist.
And apologies to all those whose work i haven't read despite the read requests. Will try and catch up.

Have a beautiful day.

P.S. Feel free to tell me what you think off this piece. Also do tell me if i should add a few more stanzas, i felt as though they may take away from the piece but if it feels incomplete i will add a few more lines.
Thank you.

Reviews

[SLY Girl]

Sadness, and other emotions like this, puts us in a state of humbleness, in a mind and heart of gratitude - for many times (for me), sadness and depressed feelings made us, and shaped us into who we are. Makes us appreciate the good times in life, and lets us discover what happiness really is to us - and recognize that we have something much greater than happiness. Joy. Joy is an everlasting presence or essence, while happiness is only a temporary feeling. Very nice write, I liked it a lot. Made me think, and I like poems that make me think. :)

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you sly. :)

[SLY Girl]

You're welcome! :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Nice poem .... "like my mother's touch on a dreary night"..... beautiful line.....good flow of emotions too... a good read....

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem.
"I spent my life wishing you away,
But now, I beg for you to stay,"
Above line can stand on their own. Sometime what we need. Is what we have. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you Coyote . You're reviews are always appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Isabella Disney]

I definitely think you could elaborate, give the reader more of a feel for the emotion briefly flickered in these few beautiful lines. thank you for sharing, I am happy to say I understand the poem :)

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for your input Isabella it is much appreciated.

[R Smith]

no need to add more this stands as it is as a great poem, sometimes sadness can be as much a comfort as a sorrow, well written :)

[Rene Salinas]

To be reminded that the treacherous journey lays ahead and that as soon as we can lift our head high we seee that actually we have managed to relate to it. We might even feel connected in ways we never thought we could. Difficult the may have been but they were there! The accompanied you and will continue to do so. If all emotions would come to use with the exponential magnitude of resplandecent light they will impact us even more! WHo knows to what degree? A little darkness in that sense is a shield.

Thank You

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you Rene for another insightful review.

[Stephen]

This poem was simple, but had some good meaning behind it. I do not feel that the poem was to short. The poem said it's piece and anything more, as you said, may have only served to distort the meaning. I look forward to reading some more of your work. This poem did resonate with me and had meaning for myself aswell. I appreciate your work

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you so very much sir. Your input is appreciated.

[Stephen]

My pleasure

[Emily]

I like this one!
Short and sweet!
Keep it up!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful poem with a wonderful ending. A powerful statement...:)..............

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you sir. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........