Uncertainity

Things unsaid
And reasons unknown
Left alone 
Deprived of hope
Troubles in the heart
Confusion all about
Its time to go 
Go for a while
Or a lifetime
Unknown 
But with a promise to return
And the hope to be friends forever more
This goodbye I say 
For now
And wish for it pass by not too slow
For your company I will miss forever more

Things unsaid 
Are often the best
And this is my test
So part ways I must
But remember the trust
For in it lies hope
Without hurt or dust

Take care you must
For foolish you are
And get hurt too soon
Live life
And never give up that heart
For its the one thing that I trust.

Author's Note

tired something different.
Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Take care you must
For foolish you are
And get hurt too soon
Live life
And never give up that heart
For its the one thing that I trust.

When we are younger we believe that it is our thoughts that will deliver us … but then we realize they only keep us prisoner. The heart will lead you to wild places … can result in the death of the flesh … but it is the greatest teacher for it tells no lies.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you pryde for an insightful review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

true, things unsaid are often more effective than those we do say...

i like how the sentiment rocks in this with a really good beat.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you sir.

[hardeep sabharwal]

life itself is uncertain,,
a good write here, and your words are attractive

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Things unsaid
Are often the best"
Great wisdom in the words above. Silence is better than negative words and thoughts. I like your poetry. Had the feel of real life and a life of learning. Good to meet you and welcome to the W.C.
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.