Darkness

Left alone to die yet again
I see the light not far away 
I wish it engulfs me and brings upon me eternal peace
But alas that was not to be as i rise from darkness to darkness yet again 
Leaving behind the calm and peace i enter the into the void of the storm of hatred 
Without any meaning we stumble upon this piece of land ,disrupting ,destroying and devouring everything in our path.
I wish to see the light and forget the storm fly away into the peace and calm of love and healing leaving behind a world so cruel that knows no limits to exploitation and corruption
Take me away far away into the abyss where there may be peace and freedom from the pain and suffering 
Take me away 
Take me away
Far away 

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I wish to see the light and forget the storm fly away into the peace and calm of love and healing leaving behind a world so cruel that knows no limits to exploitation and corruption
Take me away far away into the abyss where there may be peace and freedom from the pain and suffering
Take me away
Take me away
Far away

Wonderful write. I think ultimately that peace lies within the very core of all of us … alas we are often too busy looking for something on the outside to safe us. But I do go on:)

[Angad Waraich]

Well thank you for reading and for such an insightful review.
And it is true peace does lie within us all its just a question of finding out how to accept it rather than achieve it(I hope that made sense).

[Pryde Foltz]

very much so:)

[Rene Salinas]

There are a few issues of punctuation that made it hard to read some tendencies will want you to write according to rhythm and very little punctuation some other will rely on punctuation heavily so the writing is read precisely how you wanted it to be read.

I wish it engulfs me and brings upon me eternal peace, this read funny is this; A wish, it englufs me or A wish that engulfs me and.

If you decide to go the non punctuation way then you need to format it as you wish to be read.

Ok that nonsense aside. It is funny how you name it darkness yet you share that you do not like to reside there and as soon as you can you want to take off onto the trusting light. Ironic since the poem is about darkness.

A contridiction in terms then.

Thankyou

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you!
Tried my hand at negative writing, not great i know but yeah tried something.
But thank you for your honest opinion.