Dream Girl

: Its that time
That time again 
The time
When i see you smile
And fall in love
All over again

But then again
The thought gets lost in the wind
As i wake up from a dream
The One i can never live in

As reality strikes
I come to grips with life
And realize 
For you i am but a shadow
Maybe a cloud passing by

But then again
I look into those eyes
And that thought vanishes from my mind
And i loose sense of wrong and right
As i stand dazzled by the glow in those eyes

Try as i may i can not forget
The gleam 
The joy 
The life
Inside those eyes
And that gleam 
Leads me to my dream
A place i'd trade my whole world to be

Hold those hands i never may
Or be the reason behind your smile
But i know for sure
You are the one behind mine 
Even if its only for a while

Reviews

[MusicManiac]

Hello there!

What a beautifully written poem! It reminds me of one of my favorite Dr. Seuss quotes:

"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams."

This poem takes the idea of dreams being better than reality, because in our dreams we don't have to feel unrequited love. But one of my favorite aspects of love is the fact that even if it is not returned, we can still derive happiness from it, simply by seeing the other person (which reminds me of one of your other poems)--and that's part of the beauty of the enigma of it.

I truly enjoyed reading this--thank you for sharing it!

~MusicManiac

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.

[Bluefire]

Longing, loving, dreaming fantasy.
It stands over the line between heartbreak and joy and teeters in a dirction which you can only dream to be joyful.
Very well played, what a sweet poem!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^

[Arjun Singh]

Angad bhai, bhaut achi hai, likd it a lot, keep writing!!!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This poem is simply beautiful, and romantic.
It tells a story of a guy who just keeps daydreaming about this certain girl, who has him in a daze. Even though she doesn't know him, he admires her from a distance... quietly.
Maybe she would be just as intreged by him if only he where to speak to her!
Great write :)

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you. I Will read some of your work soon .

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)
thank you :)

[Pryde Foltz]

As reality strikes
I come to grips with life
And realize
For you i am but a shadow
Maybe a cloud passing by

An expressive and very beautiful write, Angad.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you Pryde.

[armin]

Hye, you detailed the poem with excellence and no deny its a beautiful poem. I like this part of poem very much ,
'But then again
I look into those eyes
And that thought vanishes from my mind'.
Take a look and review at my work too.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you.

[alice3wonderland]

I really liked this poem it was beautifully written and what I feel all the time if only to find love if only for one second

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for reading. :)

[Mark]

i love your flow and imagery, i love the gentle tones of your voice and the understanding within your soul...

but.. can i ask why? why in that moment could you not throw all to the skies... to trade your world and try?

i know this was about accepting and enjoying that which could never be... but i say, it ain't over til it's over ;)

[Angad Waraich]

Well in all honesty it was over before i had a chance, so it was all the little moments and glimpses that inspired this piece.
Anyways thank you for reading and reviewing.

[RAOrourke]

Such beauty flows with your words. Speechless at the beauty and depth of this one! The feelings you evoke in your readers is a real talent and I am so glad that you share your work with us.
As reality strikes
I come to grips with life
And realize
For you i am but a shadow
Maybe a cloud passing by
This was a great way of sweeping the reader back to the reality as you are taken on this ride through your poem. Very nice!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you so very much =)
Really appreciate it.

[Myle Rent]

I don't know why but every time i read your poem i get lost in my imagination. very nice, the words spoke to me as if they were mine. thank you for sharing this. =)

"Inside those eyes
And that gleam
Leads me to my dream
A place i'd trade my whole world to be

Hold those hands i never may
Or be the reason behind your smile
But i know for sure
You are the one behind mine
Even if its only for a while"

those words or parts captured my emotions. only thing is the redundancy of the word 'again' on the first part. but that is your style and every writers and poets has their own way of saying things. aside from that this poem speaks loudly.

[Angad Waraich]

That you so very much for your kind words.

[Myle Rent]

you're welcome, send me more if you please =)