Forever

Forever

A Poem by Angad Waraich

It seems like its been forever since i saw your face.
But i see you everyday, all the time, any place i close my eyes.
It seems like its been forever since i heard your voice call my name.
But still i hear you every dark and lonely night
like you're an angel watching over me from beyond the skies.
Its been forever since the night you cried yourself to sleep.
But every drop you shed that day still daunts my mind and bores a hole deep inside.
Its been forever since i heard you laugh or saw you smile.
But just a thought makes me feel alive,and washes away all the pain hidden inside.
Its been forever since felt your touch against my skin
But every time the wind blows by
It brings back the memory of every touch and every kiss.
Its been forever since i saw the gleam behind your eyes
But still i see it every stary night
Its been forever since we talked and poured out our hearts contents
But every dreamy night we share and shed all the weight we carry inside.
I know it seems like forever since you were alive
But you still live on eternally inside this heart of mine.

© 2015 Angad Waraich


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An intimate feeling shared here. The incessant use of the phrase "Its been forever" to add a certain cyclic feeling. A bit of a risky thing as it can lead to monothematic and predictable, some will begin reading and very quickly go "Oh, is one of those ones". But it was kept concise and again to share a moment of relations to something that it is not revealed. If it is human or just a presence the narrative tell us that the impact was such that it will live eternally inside.

Strong image right there.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

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Another fantastic poem. I love the way you describe your love. Really loved reading this one. My favourite lines - "I know it seems like forever since you were alive
But you still live on eternally inside this heart of mine."

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I really enjoy simple and meaningful words simply put together, not deep but not shallow. nice one again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

Thank You Myle.
An intimate feeling shared here. The incessant use of the phrase "Its been forever" to add a certain cyclic feeling. A bit of a risky thing as it can lead to monothematic and predictable, some will begin reading and very quickly go "Oh, is one of those ones". But it was kept concise and again to share a moment of relations to something that it is not revealed. If it is human or just a presence the narrative tell us that the impact was such that it will live eternally inside.

Strong image right there.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

Thank You.
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B.J
I am so pleased I clicked on this poem, I truly enjoyed reading it. Each line is written with a gentle touch.
A memory to hang onto

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

Thank you for those kind words.
B.J

10 Years Ago

you're welcome
"I know it seems like forever since you were alive
But you still live on eternally inside this heart of mine."
I like the yearning for someone missed. I like the above lines. Some people do stay with us forever.
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Angad Waraich

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Angad Waraich
Angad Waraich

Brampton, Canada



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