Maybe ....

one of my older poems haha....still most of them are suckish...anyhoo enjoy~

Maybe if you're lucky...

      someone will save you...

before you learn how to kill yourself.

 

Maybe they'll save you...

      before your skin becomes..

scarred by bloody tears.

 

Before your nightmares...

       become the reality you...

will have to forever live in.

 

Before your heart....

      is totally made of...

rock hard stone.

 

Maybe there's a...

      simple lucky chance...

someone actually will care.

Author's Note

well there ya go...

Reviews

[Inci]

that's a nice poem.. i like short poems..meaningful without elaborating

[Pyrrha Rayn]

Thanks!!!! I may have to look them up and see if they would want to read it! Thanks again :)

[Cheyenne]

Wow this is totally now suckish this is a very true poem and reminds me of an organization called To Write Love On Her Arms... or TWLOHA its a great place and they would love to read something like this

[Pyrrha Rayn]

Thank you! I know what you mean. Its so hard though, because in reality you find someone to pull you out of the"maybe" but someone else (i.e. another friend {guy or girl} or some other person) puts you back in that spot

[Nyida Strong]

Impressive! We all seem to be looking for that someone, if for no other reason then we can stop living in "maybe". Beautifully painful, well done.

N. Strong