Fading

MORE DEPRESSION!! YAY!!!!

Fading

By: Jenna S. Wise

 

Somebody save me…

From a pain that never leaves….

As I keep screaming for an escape.

 

Can you still see my eyes....?

As my fingers reach for security….

Or have I already faded into a black oblivion…

Unseen to any man’s eye.

 

My heart is stone…

And my emotions ripped raw….

My legs are crippled…

And the pain has finally stopped.

 

I’m just fading into darkness that none can comprehend…

Fading into an ink stained by the loss of friends and innocence….

Most of me is gone….vanished into a forbidden sea.

 

Maybe sometimes you’re to broken to be saved…

Maybe its better just to let yourself fade…

Fading, fading, fading gone not much difference….

When nobody has ever really taken time to take notice.

 

Let these broken wings try to fly…

Let me fade away into an ice that makes me feel warm rather then numb…

Let me forget the pain you caused…

~Let me sink and fade until one day you realize I’m actually gone~

Author's Note

there you go. can you feel the emotions??

Reviews

[Pyrrha Rayn]

Thanks Hopeless ghost :) ) That makes me feel a lot better about it...I never thought anyone would think this highly of one of my poems

[These Haunted Hallways]

Woh, now that was really deep! I've felt this kind of pain many of times, and still do. You've hit it right on the head. Deep, raw, and very moving. Excellent job with this one!!

M.

[Pyrrha Rayn]

Thank you musci Junkie :D That's really encouraging lol considering its a dark poem. And thats pretty epic avatar i thought it just fit the mood of the poem so im sure it fits the mood of your book :)

[MusicJunkie66]

yeah, I can defintely feel the emotions, it was awesome. I love the font that you used, it made the poem even more beautiful =)

(p.s. I used the same avatar for a book that I wrote)

[Pyrrha Rayn]

why thank you, ever so much :)

[Finvarra]

real emotions... can feel them, gripping