No Chance

hearing you talk about her…
erases the smile from my face
watching you with her…
makes me want to cry ‘til there’s no tears left
but knowing that there’s no chance of us ever being together…
is like a knife through the heart that will never go away </3

Reviews

[ashley]

....
Not exacatly the feel-good poem of the year.
But then again. what poems are?
Full of emotions, but bitter and sad ones.
So, I challange you to write a poem thats NOT sad.
Write one that could bring your spirits up.
You see, anyone in the world can write a depressing poem,
it happens all the time.
It really takes someone special to write something that
people can read and smile at.
SO, I dare you, write something that will make you smile.
:D!

[Juanita]

Nice poem, short but full of emotion....I remember that feeling.