Let It Be

Let It Be

A Poem by Zeref
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The disturbances that life create affect our mind but sometimes we should tell ourselves-"let It be."

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Flames of water are not possible,
Tides of fire are just not feasible
Let it be.
Losing cool and hiding.
Trust me , a real good thought,
Shatter the rules, do what you ought.
Let it be.
Keep together the values,
Teachings and knowledge.
Again there are a lot of dues.
Let it be.
Love something.
Hate nothing
Bond everything, remember good.
Memorize the best. Forgive the bad.
Let it be.
Fall but rise.
Don't look back.
Stay in the cave,make a hole
Focus the light, feel the warmth.
If not this,
Stay dark, not in the cave but in the night.
Matters not.
Dark or light.
Its just day and night.
Let it be.
Do your deed.
Success indeed.
Forever for the feed.
Let it be.

© 2020 Zeref


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The opening two lines are superb, it sure does the task of urging the reader to read more into your poem. There is a lot of wisdom hidden in those short lines. While I understand your message is to urge people to accept things as they are, we have to keep in mind that we are not ideal beings. Mistakes do happen. Other than that, a great read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zeref

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. And i truly am happy that you understood the meaning and realized what I wanted to con.. read more



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The opening two lines are superb, it sure does the task of urging the reader to read more into your poem. There is a lot of wisdom hidden in those short lines. While I understand your message is to urge people to accept things as they are, we have to keep in mind that we are not ideal beings. Mistakes do happen. Other than that, a great read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zeref

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. And i truly am happy that you understood the meaning and realized what I wanted to con.. read more
While I appreciate the message of the poem, the flow seems a bit off. There is little cohesion between a line and the line before and after it. Because of that, it feels more of a list of just some random inspiring words glued together.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zeref

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing my work. Yeah I will work on that cohesion more. Thanks for your suggestion. I .. read more
MantaStyle

4 Years Ago

Ignoring a rhyming scheme doesn't really make it more or less comprehensive, though it is easier to .. read more
Zeref

4 Years Ago

Ya I will surely read your poems. Actually I am not basically a poet or something like that. My wor.. read more

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Zeref
Zeref

Bilaspur, Chattisgarh, India



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