Seeking Idealism

Its not exactly a story. Its something I thought and discovered when I read The Holy Bhagavad Gita. I have many pieces of writing . This is Just a part of it.

I understood one thing spirit has no form. It is always present. It was not born. If put in other words, I could say Idealism has always existed and is same for all. A thing or a particular idea of idealism can only be true when there is no multiplicity of it. All is same and has always existed. It is our minds , our different goals which make us ponder to be different. We find compatibility to get a reason to find that idealism. We are fearful creatures and fear losing good. Whenever good comes we snatch it away. Its not being selfish , but being human. Its been a violation of our thoughts from the start. Each man has its own reasons and thus finds himself different but sometimes not great. Man finds himself great only when he has been once. Just once is enough for a lifetime to be great. But it is pseudo thinking. One who is truly great stays great not once not twice but all the time. When he falls, he becomes sad but not ignorant. That sadness gives birth to delusion. But then there is again a filter applied . Wisdom. One who is wise is always aware that sadness is not a term that is unborn , so it is not a part of spirit. For those who truly seek idealism which is not a part of spirit shall not be felt. Following your soul and spirit is the path to idealism. Each time a problem or misery arrives a filter is applied to human. It depends yet on the human if he decides to be filtrate or waste. Filters never reveal themselves but universe gives us clues through which these filters can be found within ourselves. We are source of everything. We just need to dig deeper...

Author's Note

It is not a story but in the category box I didn't get an option for article so I selected story as it is surely not anything else.

Reviews

[Aradhana]

Well, this is something that philosophers say and I wonder being a science student how you get time to think on these issues so briefly.....very well explained and correctly said that every lies within ourselves as to our perspective, attitude and way of responding is what makes all the difference. Human mind is indeed a complex organ. A very good and satisfying work, Zefer.
ASBD

[Zeref]

Thank you Aradhana.

[Aradhana]

You are always welcom😊😊😁

[Aradhana]

Sorry for my mistake while taking ur name...got confused, Zeref.🙃

[Zeref]

its ohkk..

[Nathan Cavaliere]

An interesting excerpt you have here: I am glad you posted it to the Teenage Writing Clan for me to see it. As you stated it is really less of a story and more of a description about a religious experience, so naturally I cannot use the same methods for critiquing a narrative. It definitely is a mental strain to read and I can't fully say by the end I knew what you were going for, but I don't think that is something avoidable when explaining a religious experience. As a budding student of Buddhism I certainly have a good idea as to why such things may be hard to explain. I would still recommend however breaking this excerpt up into multiple paragraphs and using a less jarring font. The formatting is a little hard on the eyes, and when dealing with an already complex subject it is best not to add in further complexity into the formatting.

[Zeref]

Thanks for your review. I thought I would just start by introducing the path for idealism. Its a vast topic and what I wrote was just an explanation and comparison of two lines from The Holy Bhagavad Gita. I just compared my thoughts and philosophy of idealism. Next time I would use a simple font. Thanks for suggestion.

[Nathan Cavaliere]

You can edit stories after they have been published and change the font around if you think it is a problem. Aside from that though, you my want to say that this is the introduction to a grander work of yours. As of now you only say it is part of a greater writing, and its not automatically clear that this is the foreword for that writing. It could better encourage people to look into your writing if they knew that it was all based around this theory, lest they think this theory just a fleeting part of the writing as a whole.

[Zeref]

I will surely take your suggestion into effect