You

You

A Poem by Invisible Ink
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a love poem

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You
the half-way house
for my heart

© 2011 Invisible Ink


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Sad and hopeful. This seems to me to be a chance for someone to find love again after having been in a seriously bad relationship. Impressive work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


How true. A heart can go through rehab as do relationships its all work isn't it. Enjoyed how you've isolated the...you ...with the house separating the heart as a safety net...clever.

Posted 13 Years Ago


damn. I'm all for short and sweet, but the humble beginning here shows promise. The halfway house to my heart like an addiction.
Invisible ink a great name, don't let the same thing happen to the pieces.

sim sim salad bins

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 8, 2011
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Invisible Ink
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"I guess I wrote in invisible ink, Oh, I've tried to think how I could have made it appear"- Aimee Mann Open the cage and set the bird free. I am a writer. A poet. Words have saved me. I am a .. more..

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