Sweet Thieves

bugs! cinquain

Ants
little lines
march, munch, infest
always in my honey
Pest!

Reviews

[Nimbus Thread]

Cute. Packs a punch...well crafted.

[Nobody.]

lol. they can be quite evil. nice poem. made me smile. that is always a great gift. cheers!

[Monday Parker]

This is to cute. Not one wasted word!!!

[mir]

A fun read of one of nature's annoyances in the summer time---the disciplined and organized army of ants looking for the sweet stuff in the kitchen! Nice short write!

[Im His Daughter]

hahah this is great i love it! good job

[Liza]

i love honey! such a cute poem; wonderful imagery; i see the ants running away laughing as they march.

[Norma M Sutton]

lol I love this. The title says it all and the verse just explains it lol

[Tony]

Cool-- a word cinquain.
How refreshing to read a form.

Yea, the little things in life can be that way can't they.
Oh yea, "Ants" and "honey" nice contrasts. Sweet taste imagery as well.

[Invisible Ink]

Thanks Doug! Goodness, I know! I just had a baby and my brain has been completely fried, it's the sleep deprivation.

[Doug Ordunio]

Shame on you! An English teacher who misspells a title?? You get a C for your spelling, but a B for the poem...:-)