Sweet Thieves

Sweet Thieves

A Poem by Invisible Ink
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bugs! cinquain

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Ants
little lines
march, munch, infest
always in my honey
Pest!

© 2010 Invisible Ink


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Cute. Packs a punch...well crafted.

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol. they can be quite evil. nice poem. made me smile. that is always a great gift. cheers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is to cute. Not one wasted word!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A fun read of one of nature's annoyances in the summer time---the disciplined and organized army of ants looking for the sweet stuff in the kitchen! Nice short write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


hahah this is great i love it! good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love honey! such a cute poem; wonderful imagery; i see the ants running away laughing as they march.

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol I love this. The title says it all and the verse just explains it lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool-- a word cinquain.
How refreshing to read a form.

Yea, the little things in life can be that way can't they.
Oh yea, "Ants" and "honey" nice contrasts. Sweet taste imagery as well.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Thanks Doug! Goodness, I know! I just had a baby and my brain has been completely fried, it's the sleep deprivation.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Shame on you! An English teacher who misspells a title?? You get a C for your spelling, but a B for the poem...:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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