Sweet Thieves
A Poem by
Invisible Ink
bugs! cinquain
Ants
little lines
march, munch, infest
always in my honey
Pest!
© 2010 Invisible Ink
Reviews
Cute. Packs a punch...well crafted.
Posted 13 Years Ago
lol. they can be quite evil. nice poem. made me smile. that is always a great gift. cheers!
Posted 13 Years Ago
lol. they can be quite evil. nice poem. made me smile. that is always a great gift. cheers!
This is to cute. Not one wasted word!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is to cute. Not one wasted word!!!
A fun read of one of nature's annoyances in the summer time---the disciplined and organized army of ants looking for the sweet stuff in the kitchen! Nice short write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
A fun read of one of nature's annoyances in the summer time---the disciplined and organized army of ants looking for the sweet stuff in the kitchen! Nice short write!
hahah this is great i love it! good job
Posted 13 Years Ago
hahah this is great i love it! good job
i love honey! such a cute poem; wonderful imagery; i see the ants running away laughing as they march.
Posted 13 Years Ago
i love honey! such a cute poem; wonderful imagery; i see the ants running away laughing as they march.
lol I love this. The title says it all and the verse just explains it lol
Posted 13 Years Ago
lol I love this. The title says it all and the verse just explains it lol
Cool-- a word cinquain.
How refreshing to read a form.
Yea, the little things in life can be that way can't they.
Oh yea, "Ants" and "honey" nice contrasts. Sweet taste imagery as well.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Cool-- a word cinquain.
How refreshing to read a form.
Yea, the little things in life can be that way can't they.
Oh yea, "Ants" and "honey" nice contrasts. Sweet taste imagery as well.
Thanks Doug! Goodness, I know! I just had a baby and my brain has been completely fried, it's the sleep deprivation.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thanks Doug! Goodness, I know! I just had a baby and my brain has been completely fried, it's the sleep deprivation.
Shame on you! An English teacher who misspells a title?? You get a C for your spelling, but a B for the poem...:-)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Shame on you! An English teacher who misspells a title?? You get a C for your spelling, but a B for the poem...:-)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 18, 2010
Last Updated on November 21, 2010
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Invisible Ink NC
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"I guess I wrote in invisible ink,
Oh, I've tried to think how I could have made it appear"- Aimee Mann
Open the cage and set the bird free.
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