Songs to the Yellow Moon

Fireflies talked across my yard

all night with little sparks of light

conversations only visible

in the dark, secret messages

that the crickets sung back

in a strange tempo, high and low

calling to that yellow moon

 

 

 

Reviews

[Texas]

Simple and pretty. Paints a wonderful picture of Summer time. I can see the fireflies and hear the crickets. Nicely done.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the sense of life, alive in the moon's reflected light.. The night seems so still, yet there is a vibrance about it that your words set to music.

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delightful..vivid and beautiful idea

[Nimbus Thread]

A wonderful thought the light of whispers at night. Oh, I want to be there! A beautiful image.

[Desert Dreamer]

I love these songs of nature and the way the fireflies speak with light here in your words... I wonder what secrets they sing of.

[Kira]

Hmm, I like the concept, but I don't think the title fits it very well. Maybe you could message me and explain, because this is going to bug me until I understand.