Keeping Secrets

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Pry me open like a clam

If you wish to see

the darker side inside me

for I can not help

but to close tight

when the fisherman

casts his net wide

Dig me up like a root

If you want to find

where my past has spread

for I burrow deep

into the ground

when the logger

tries to cut me down

 

 

Reviews

[Don Coorough]

These are alluring and yet aloof images at the same time. Nice juxtaposition of open vulnerability and challenging enigma. I enjoyed the write very much.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

nice , I like it :) Yossi