Black Coffee

a love poem

In those dreary days

before you

I took my coffee

with sugar and cream

now I take it black,

you are the sweetness

my life once lacked 

 

Reviews

[rowan.taylorrr]

i really like this. i love the length but it has so much meaning

[Liza]

awww that's hot!

[G. K. Bostic]

This is cute.....it works. He must be really sweet! ;)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Short and to the point! I loved it!

[*skittlez*]

kick a*s i like it make it longer and add puncuation marks k

[Angel's Lady]

KICK A*S! This rocked! Yes! Terrific write! Applause, applause!