The End

The End

A Poem by Invisible Ink
"

ahhh relationships

"
I had to leave
I could not stay
I was suffocating
slowly dying
my lips were turning blue
my heart was exploding
every time I felt
stepped on by you

© 2016 Invisible Ink


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Short but expressive :) I can relate to this one.. That suffocation that we feel,but we still don't wanna leave, 'cuz we like it some way or another :)

Good use of words to keep it short.. Not trying to make it look fancy and expressing only the things that you feel is great! I love it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Short but expressive :) I can relate to this one.. That suffocation that we feel,but we still don't wanna leave, 'cuz we like it some way or another :)

Good use of words to keep it short.. Not trying to make it look fancy and expressing only the things that you feel is great! I love it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Invisible Ink
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"I guess I wrote in invisible ink, Oh, I've tried to think how I could have made it appear"- Aimee Mann Open the cage and set the bird free. I am a writer. A poet. Words have saved me. I am a .. more..

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