All At Once

All at once...

 

I feel the feelings thought

 

long dead.

 

All at once...

 

I feel my body thought

 

devoid of sensation.

 

All at once...

 

I feel the desires thought

 

buried away by isolation.

 

All at once...

 

I was a man again,

 

aroused in mind,

 

soul,

 

heart,

 

and body,

 

alive and in love...

 

All at once by you.

Author's Note

Written for a former girlfriend. Inspired by romantic poetry.

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

This is beautiful and gentle.

[Craig]

Thank you very much. Sometimes, I get a little self-conscious about this kind of writing. :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Don't! Writing exposes a vulnerable part of us...it can be almost painful...well, it often IS painful. Readers relate to the authenticity of vulnerability. :)