Life

As we gaze into the sun

We want to leave the world behind

We stare at the stars

In search of hope and a sign

We all dream of love

But do we know what its like?

We are fighting a losing fight?

But that's life.

Craig John Edwards

Reviews

[Susana Grace]

This is simplicity at its best and the usage of words "But that's life" brilliantly highlighting the irony between reality and dreams, Loved it !

[Craig John Edwards]

Thank you for reviewing back and taking the time to read some of my work!!

[Jesse]

Ah, fresh Poetry that runs smooth and concise, if I can say it that way. ... Loved it! Excellent writes Craig.

[Craig John Edwards]

Thank you for taking the time to read, this thanks is overdue my apologies.