Concede

Welcome I wholeheartedly,

The pangs of truly knowing

The fact that my life's greatest love,

Is someone else's owning

That someone else enjoys the kiss

I hoped to be enjoying;

And someone else is thanking God 

For granting him her loving!

Reviews

[Tha Wind AKA VERBAL OX]

short and interesting. i feel as though you could have added a little more umph to it. well thats just my feeling on the matter. keep writer and exploring.

[Oydrin]

Thank you for reading and giving feedback Verbal Ox. Could you expound a little more on 'umph' that you say I could've added?