Giving Up On A Lesser Person

This is the story of a coward

Or a lesser person if you prefer.

She is all alone

Her heart was devoured.

 

She is helpless and hopless

And always fails

Her emotions are tangled

And she can never prevail.

 

She is worried and scared

And is forever hiding from it

When she tries to love

She feels impaired.

 

Her life seems to be filled with deplore

When she looks at you a blank face is all she sees

Everyone treats the same

She is stuck in a life she didn't ask for.

 

She feels herself coming down

She is stuck

And it is all over

But she can't get out.

 

Reviews

[Brittany W]

This poem is very deep, this was a good write, i enjoyed it.

[DeadToTheWorld]

This was quite marvelous I enjoyed reading this I do hope you keep going splendid work Madam.

~ TheMadGothicHatter ~

[Luna Northstar]

Awwwww.... this is so sad.... I like the rhyme scheme though, and its really well written, and really sad.