Blood Red

Frieda inspuration (inspiration)

poetic pens plot peaceful parallels,
perfect pictures performing pirouettes,
perforating proliferating pin pricks projecting ,
predisposition, presumption into your heart.
Blood Red.

Author's Note

Whimsical

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she does a lot of this alliteration thing, frieda does...and like her, you do it quite well..

and it's a good Blood Red as i read it...a positive thing that comes from pens in peaceful parallel.

[lee von cleef]

I need to carve out a block of time to work on rhythm and rhyme ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you already do it naturally...

[Linda alexander]

perfect pictures performing pirouettes,
Displays things when world is blind and deaf with intensified frequency and wave length, excellent write, very powerful write too, enjoyed

[lee von cleef]

Thank you, you might like another of mine: The religious edge in my mind

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care

[Frieda P]

Pure passion poignantly pen'd perfectly, peculiarity posing proficient.

[lee von cleef]

Had a problem with my post mechanical fonts showing error every where.(like paragraphs of em)

[lee von cleef]

now it is a clean mystery.

[Frieda P]

I told em to mess with your head ;-) mwah!

[lee von cleef]

like I am not mixed up enough yet,

[Frieda P]

You can never be too insane hon....

[Claire in VA]

perfectly penned!
much enjoyed =)

[Einstein Noodle]

agree with Icy ... it has a forward power that propels the reader and gives it some serious undertones (tho whimsical and fun) ... causes me to not race thru ... last two lines leave me pondering ... a good stuff says i
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[icelandicblue]

I love the alliteration and how the words all roll together until the ending which brings the plethora of poetry to its inevitable end as a red dropped image. This is both interesting as well as whimsical.