Tears on a Window or Rain

She had cheeks and Lips
Thick
With pout, plump,
The kind eye to hold yours.
Comforting unassuming,
She says all right there.
Me assuming,
grasp and grab,
When I should be shy and coy,

The look of my reality.

Write...

 I'll just write.

Author's Note

Thank you, Poppy Ruth Silver.

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

Just because she is pretty and sweet and kind... And doesnt immediately turn away... no it doesn't mean she wants you... Tears on a Window or Rain... Love the analogy... How easy it is to misinterpret... See what we want to see in others, especially when it comes to imagining someone so lovely might love us...

[lee von cleef]

thank you so, I needed cash flow, so working again,and my mind won't let go of the day, but man that dream is a beauty. O K I just read what I wrote, Nuts yes more then likely.

[Neville]

A delight to read & to ponder upon.... Regards to your pen N

[Sheila Kline]

When we venture to "go outside of the norm" it is always better to grab a pen, or a keyboard and write!!
It is lot safer and may serve as a vent for whatever we want to say! And more importantly,
we are able to send a message beyond the here and now to the "where we want it to go"!!