Clay Ode to Diego's  '79

Clay Ode to Diego's '79

A Poem by lee von cleef

The potter's square brick of clay
Unfolds heavy onto the level top.
Tossing the plastic wrap aside,
Hands wet with knowledge,
You have laid out a hat trick of of boundaries,
These are yours of '79 but mine of '79.....
New Mexico,
Not much different,
From the old one...
The wheel spins , the mind runs backwards ,
Damp calluses cup punch pressure become a pitcher,
A plate, a cup,              
The chalice of a life one function,
To be....
Give, then pause,Silence, and give thanks, believe, look through,
Think past your purpose,feel the resulting consequence...
Now act.


© 2013 lee von cleef


Author's Note

lee von cleef


Picture: Paul Wright, Rio Ariba Match Race

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The meditative motions of hands slipping over spinning wet clay... Construction into a function... This does take knowledge and experience... Reminds me of going to the pottery club with my friend and watching she and the other experienced, something profoundly beautiful rising from thier cupped hands, while my own cup... Haha, well the glazing was fun too...
And I think you are older than Diego...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Horizon K.

11 Years Ago

Oh I love those too... Now you have me wanting some. My mom always made them so well...
Tree

11 Years Ago

You two are making me hungry. I think I know now what I'm having for dinner tonight.
Horizon K.

10 Years Ago

This, was such a beautiful moment...
Ah, 79...



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i so admire people who can do pottery...it is such a beautiful art...and this poem describes the feeling of it so well..calluses become a pitcher, or a cup...a purpose that comes to fruition.

really nice piece here that you have sculpted with your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. This one hits me where I live, literally. I came to NM in 79.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A splendid read and write ...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A call to action only after quiet reflection.
Worthy...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is quite an inspirational poem. To find ones purpose then live it out, intentionally. How many of us do, or decide to when we feel it's too late. How we are always capable of starting over, no matter what we feel- finding that zone and pushing through it to mold the days in to a life that matters to- someone, anyone , in a real way. Beautifully measured, and just, just right.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What we make before us and how we use what we have made sets the path we travel. I just loved the contrast of these lines:

The wheel spins , the mind runs backwards ,

We move forward but the past is never far behind. A wonderful read, thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun and interesting write. We see a snapshot of a life. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Seems we mould ourselves just as we mould that clay - any year. We create selves in place, in shape, in colours bright or dull, fragility or strength. We create beauty with our hands - form, size, use slip, and all, then firing into solid form. All same as making the man or woman into more than an empty bowl.

You create thoughts as your words fly the ether, mister.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Yes and thank you for the smile....
emmajoy

11 Years Ago

With luck the smile will travel onwards.. a stone sending ripples out and away .. one can only hope... read more
why say, 'pause/silence' ? Like a playwrite, I wonder?
not that it matters, remotely....
I enjoyed this snapshot of the clay worker's activites,
I can hear the click-clack sounds

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

I was thinking of the sculpture "The Thinker" and Meditation, or now with computers, the conscious .. read more
Our memories mold us, shape us. And we keep filling our vessel until the cup runneth over, and we are no more. Thank you for creating, Lee.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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