Ocean Stardust

"From a distant Star" you really need to read Emma's first, A Tomato is good dripping down your chin, but add basil, salt now...feel the love.

Puff the magic dragon, and Emma, writing
With her sails unfurled ,
Air full straining the seems,
Straining forests gift of fur,
Foam lapping the bows breast bending the white caps,
Puff the magic dragon, succumb,desire,pierce the light.
Bring on the cannon let the cannon blow,
Grapeshot broadside,shoals be dammed,
Give her to the sea,
Puff the magic dragon caressed and the Ocean green opened
Pulled the beauty.
                          Six feet under a oyster bank,feathered her barnacles
 
And Indifference

Bled blue down the check of the marooned.

Posted 4 Months Ago

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Flowing and natural, it rolls right off the tongue when you read it, almost like a river. The imagery is magical to say the least, and I do love the "puff the magic dragon" parts.

[A.E. Surdam]

Beautiful imagery. An excellent write. :) Thanks for sharing this magnificent piece.

[John]

A ravishing beauty of a poem

[Tree]

A natural flowing homage for a wonderful poet. The imagery was hauntingly beautiful, I for one could see Em and that ocean of hers, becoming one....

[captain]

a lyrical poem, the melody of the song i remembered sings along as i read the poem. Brilliant!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Emma does have a magical touch with her words and you did her great justice with this write.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

an evocative piece, you do have a very particular way with language which paints a unique picture in my mind, I love some of the line; "air full straining the seems....succumb desire, pierce the light", very clever

[Sami Khalil]

A magical write to say the least...Wow...:)