Weaver

Weaver

A Poem by lee von cleef
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cafe inspiration thank you Emily

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weaver was young
weaver had longer blond hair
weaver had soul
hiking boots
his Dad together
the scree field opened
took weaver
left his dad
and I remember the Aspens shedding their tears
every year
a stamp ,a Vibram print high on the chair
a line low on the door 
Weaver in my heart
First last name in school

© 2013 lee von cleef


Author's Note

lee von cleef
Emily ,snowed into my memory,and Diegos style ,spare weighted words ,echo ,I hope I can echo up a memory in you.5th-8th grade Appenseler,Epstien,Freidman,Timmerman,names of what I know now to be Brilliant men were just friends,I road the bus with Weaver.His death really laid dormant some 40 years,until I got to swim in a pool of Empathy with his father.

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I sense the fondly factual tone, and also appreciate the nostalgic, bereft sentiments to this poem, I hope you feel some comfort in knowing that we really all go through these phases from time to time and they certainly have made me personally, re-evaluate life's meanings and my humble place within it, nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Growing shouldn't hurt so ,I guess I will find new shoes, That's probably why girls have so many pai.. read more



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I often wondered what it might be like to meet the father of my college best friend John Pezel. Maybe you've let me know. thanks lee

Posted 11 Years Ago


I find your poetry intense because I could read and re-read...the subtle yet powerful imagery is mind blowing and lingers xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such pain and sorrow.. well penned.xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The hollowness of loss just resonates from your words. A moment in time and everything changes. Those blows are hard to carry and they echo for a lifetime. This is really a haunting poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ok, i must need to go to another Eng. Lit. class, I do not follow..

Posted 11 Years Ago


I sense the fondly factual tone, and also appreciate the nostalgic, bereft sentiments to this poem, I hope you feel some comfort in knowing that we really all go through these phases from time to time and they certainly have made me personally, re-evaluate life's meanings and my humble place within it, nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Growing shouldn't hurt so ,I guess I will find new shoes, That's probably why girls have so many pai.. read more
Beautifully written full of pain and remorse.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Thank you...Enjoy the beauty of Australia to day! You lucky gal.
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
During our lifetime a lot of people make difference in our lives but only chosen few leave their print in our hearts. But when we lose that person, we can feel their print in our heart and soul more than ever... That is well written poem! You are very talented and always allow your heart to expression true emotions!

Posted 11 Years Ago


lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Like a flower seed n the desert it just waited for enough rain to bloom.
Oh my, what a sad way to realize the pain of another!! God bless you my friend with the comfort and understanding of our Blessed Mother Mary!!!
Weaver was take away, as was your precious daughter and then you knew the pain his father felt as searing as that of boot mark left on a chair - the rubber burned right into the wood, as grief and heartache is forever burned into your soul!!
We never know the pain of another until we walk a step in their shoes, or as in this case, their boots.
An amazing write!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very talented and unique way of writing, all your own. Some people leave big marks on your heart, soul and memory. Others you have a hard time remembering,

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Good morning,Thank you for stopping by. I like to write,I like to layer a story into a poem,I want to crack through to the reader,add emotion to life, theirs and mine. more..

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