The flex of the almost Egyptian sounding muscle... Squatting
where the porcelain edge Is so narrow, The seat discarded just weeks
after the opening, First world franchise In a third world country.
Problem , But a straight shot. Espresso !
No spurs on this cowboy.... just draw a line with your boot, put your spread heals on it and squat. (First drop drawers and remove spurs, I have researched this)
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Hmmm. Your stuff makes me think and that's why I enjoy reading it so much. And this poem like your others did just that.
The idea of a coffee shop in a third world country was sort of intriguing. They sell the same sort of stuff as here but in a totally different atmosphere. I guess some things are still the same no matter where you go.
okay -- either my brain goes where it ain't s'pose to or this is a little ditty bout what happens subsequent to chewing on jalapeno seeds ...... yikes! reminds me of restrooms in france [they're co-ed don't cha know]
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Bad I know, but poems even ones that don't rhyme have layers,third world countries have a lot goin.. read moreBad I know, but poems even ones that don't rhyme have layers,third world countries have a lot going for them ,but not all of our "First" world sensibilities work here or there.
This poem is and is not really about coffee,I will try to clear it up with some pointers.
11 Years Ago
I may have let the ending over shadowed this poem, but I can picture ...where the porcelain edge Is.. read moreI may have let the ending over shadowed this poem, but I can picture ...where the porcelain edge Is so narrow,... I do like this one, even thu I had to circle the block to find a parking spot :)
11 Years Ago
I like everyone's pictures, a porcelain "Demitasse" .Dreams and poems and southern biscuits like me .. read moreI like everyone's pictures, a porcelain "Demitasse" .Dreams and poems and southern biscuits like me are flaky.
Yep, in some of the other countries, it is only the real brew that will do!! Try to introduce the iced drinks, the lattes, etc, etc, and they just won't fly! That place had little chance of survival before it even opened!
Eye opening.....give me a real cup of coffee....kind of writing!
Good morning,Thank you for stopping by. I like to write,I like to layer a story into a poem,I want to crack through to the reader,add emotion to life, theirs and mine. more..