I just really like the sound of "Constantina" Goes good with"
Puerto Rican Pachuco " Fence climbers Blue corn flat sour cream chicken
enchilada, With two eggs sunny side up, Perky...... Pitcher full of Ice 8 limes shades of green yellow scurvy fighters Agave, clear, Coinertau and his half brother Gran Marnier Let the pitcher sweat Conversation Sea side salty dream Tan line distraction Pour it up, eat it up Logic will fall short of truth Sometimes......
A feast of contrasting sounds, a cornucopia of cold sharp and broad creamy vowels, with a tactile freshness that is the aural equivalent of a work by the Dutch master Willem Kalf. Little wonder that logic falls short when a poem like this whets the reader's appetite.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Man wow,If only we cold all capture the complex complection of youth. quaff that cowlick soooo cold .. read moreMan wow,If only we cold all capture the complex complection of youth. quaff that cowlick soooo cold we are having to carry the milk in like cord wood.
Awesome poem, excellently penned, and that picture made me crack up. Especially those troll dolls, just watching Barbie being roasted........
Creative!:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Catten Catten did not even see your last monicker, Bella just held me in place,you better blink or t.. read moreCatten Catten did not even see your last monicker, Bella just held me in place,you better blink or those eye will dry out.
11 Years Ago
Haha, I was actually just thinking about changing that picture......I really should use a picture th.. read moreHaha, I was actually just thinking about changing that picture......I really should use a picture that I made/took myself.
I'm a margareta man myself with plenty of salt thank you very much. Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem of yours which has made me hungry for more...
Loving the word play and thinking I might be heading to ''Patricia's'' right now. (Homemade blue corn chicken enchilades in mole sauce).... great little piece that kicked my salivary glands into high gear... Thanks Lee. Oh, and that picture just about killed me...
Food, glorious food .. la la lala laaaaaa! Yes, please. Haven't had the pleasure of everything you list but, come what may, just watch me drool .. ever the lady! The music of a menu can be a real concert o.. and you've already made my feet move tip toe tip!
'Goes good with" Puerto Rican Pachuco " Fence climbers Blue corn flat sour cream chicken enchilada, (?) With two eggs sunny side up.' Grief, mouth watering, pass the Grand Marnier!
I have a dress, shoes, clean nails and a hair brush .. am on my way. Wonderful! Sante!
Good morning,Thank you for stopping by. I like to write,I like to layer a story into a poem,I want to crack through to the reader,add emotion to life, theirs and mine. more..