Hi Kitty

Hi Kitty

A Poem by lee von cleef
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night time fun won't play

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Feed the kids, their Kids for a week at a time
Listen to the dogs bark
step around the cat pee
this kid is funny,
Dinner table strong voice,"My dads farts stink so bad."
Go Tristan,
Eat all you want, that is priceless,
I will conspire by the fire,
walking in the
southern disaster plan.
Split wood, spoiled milk,
Fema re fund man.

© 2013 lee von cleef


Author's Note

lee von cleef
Not real poetry, But that little "Tristan" he was poetic,just hard to duplicate a six year old's comments.

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Ah heck, the kids never know when to go to sleep - that's all part of being a kid!!
And poetry is what we say it is - some have form, and some are just the words we need to vent.
I hope they don't eat you out of house and home - and if they do, I hope they at least leave enough for the kitty and the dogs!!
Gonna think twice before letting them come over again????

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

yes, I will drop my crown , make em all wake up and go to early mass.
Sheila Kline

11 Years Ago

And that's the best thing you could do for them!! Bravo!!



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Sure it is real poetry... humorous poetry but still poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ah heck, the kids never know when to go to sleep - that's all part of being a kid!!
And poetry is what we say it is - some have form, and some are just the words we need to vent.
I hope they don't eat you out of house and home - and if they do, I hope they at least leave enough for the kitty and the dogs!!
Gonna think twice before letting them come over again????

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

yes, I will drop my crown , make em all wake up and go to early mass.
Sheila Kline

11 Years Ago

And that's the best thing you could do for them!! Bravo!!
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quaint, quizzicle, and comic.
and why can't this be real poetry?. it's the holidays: i'll permit you :-)


Posted 11 Years Ago


lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

I like this little community!I wish I could write,I think that was a mistake, Letting other peoples .. read more

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Good morning,Thank you for stopping by. I like to write,I like to layer a story into a poem,I want to crack through to the reader,add emotion to life, theirs and mine. more..

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