All She Wants

words that bind

all she wants is...
a call
just one call,
a call to let her know
I thought
before I crossed the line...

I stopped wearing our ring
They turned off the phone at home

all she wants
is a call
haunting my thoughts ...
my body feels life, fresh, dancing,glancing ,tugging on me,to run,to roll,to be,to give...
All she wants
is a call
just one call,
before I cross the line...
what a promise I made...
Thanks, I'll just walk on home
I'll just walk on
on home

What we give
we take home

Author's Note

Time weaves its weight in a relationship....even after....

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi, I hope all is well. This one feels complete while posing a plethora of questions and indicating, even that this is perhaps a part of a wider sequence...which tells us over time or perhaps a piece of the intricate complexities of this particular relationship, thanks.

[lee von cleef]

Unanswered prayers, the questions roll on , I will one day address them as you ask. Then maybe I can find a solution.

[Sami Khalil]

I do believe words bind us as well as feelings. A nice honest , straightforward write.
Really enjoyable.

[Ruth]

I am always left with questions after absorbing your poetry, that is an awesome thing, sign of a gifted artist ;)
xoxo

[gombeggar]

hmm...quite a scene inside this person's head...there are always choices

[Tree]

When someone knows us well enough they can sum up the words that will always haunt us... stop us, in our tracks.

[Sheila Kline]

First of all, one must be true to oneself. When we are, we will remember how important the other person is to us, and the vows, promises, and pledges we have made to another!! I am glad you were able to convey how important this is - actions are so much more powerful than the desire, or thought to behave in another way!!
......".I wanted to behave like that..........I am so glad I behaved like this!!!"

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

interesting, my mind went straight to the possibliity of thinking about committing adultery then changing their mind. love it

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Actions speak louder then words.

[That_Girl]

"all she wants is...
a call
just one call,
a call to let her know
I thought
before I crossed the line...
I stopped wearing our ring" Cause that one call could have saved everything. Then again, maybe not.

I love this piece.

[lee von cleef]

relationship rules only mean something if you use them

[Falling Leaf.]

Is this about cheating on a wife? That's what I got out of it. It's very very good. I especially love how you ended it. Awesome write.

[lee von cleef]

Cheating on yourself, the bridle we put in our mouths.

[Falling Leaf.]

Good work