Peace to the Wild Places

Peace to the wild places.......
I wrote you a letter,
no money for the airplane,no jungle school today
Rational, not a lunchroom school-day legitimate killing

Peace to the wild places......
New Orleans Tool
Video, base, lead, modern dead heads jam
Rational, there be no shelter here

Peace to the wild places.....
how appropriate,  some open, some comfort space
Responsible dreams, flying carpets, breaking beats
Christ like... rational you were meant for me

Peace to the wild places....
The oceans breathing particles, currents of our hearts
Her I am now, look at my life...palms out ....your love returned
A long slow breath ..... cavity searching...soul burnt son

Return... the thought guides the finger tracing tracks
tracing lonely tears down the bridge of her nose
tears holding lovers,  souls bound to their breasts...Her rising cleavage
Peace to the frustration..... Peace to the climb.... Peace to the cascade...

Release.....  Release.... Melting breaths timeless moment...

Peace to the Wild Places.....

The wild heaven...wild mountains .....incomprehensible bosom...
Return..... the thought...guide the finger...trace down the bridge of her nose
lonely souls bound to their breast...


The haunting , human eternity, human virtue
Peace to the wild places....

Author's Note

Georgia has a lot of schools, one is scary good at what it teaches.

Reviews

[Mark]

The wild places. I wonder. The pain beats like a heart and I wish for the cosmos to absorb, bring peace to your wild place.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

bits and pieces that go together so well...

chaos and peace juxtaposed..the wild places and contentment...

feeling the impact of life head on...we not only survive the crash, we embrace it.

i too like the repetition of the main phrase...runs this together... sort of ferlinghetti- like.

jacob

[spiritwind]

achingly good
haunting memories in long ago places and spaces
following the tracing finger and burning desire and not burning desire
more the yearning of soul for soul
time for time
following a long slow breath
this is really really excellent

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you have included some very subtle and beautiful lines throughout and i simply adore the title....such great work

I hope you have your power on now, sounds thoroughly frustrating

[Shellie]

I love the repetition of 'Peace to the wild places'
It was very good lyrical piece.

[lee von cleef]

Wild today , no power in two days,trees across the roads,wild.

[chuna]

"peace to the wild places"


hope so,

I can imagine those places that you had mentioned and I really hope for PEACE in our world,earth,heart, and mind!

[Jess]

I loved this poem:)

[Lily Mae]

I love the way you repeat the "peace to the wild places".. it digs in the thought really well, making the point so clear.. excellent write...xo

[gombeggar]

well done expression...very good words and structure...a few comma typos though

[Tree]

I felt a long long journey, in this stimulating piece. And the wind felt good
Blowing through my hair. Thank you, Lee