Rumble,Dragon,Coiled Whipping

Rock N Roll Cowboy Inspiration

Flames,start small,
A idea,smouldering under manure for days,
Hidden in the ground, sweet roots toasting,squeezing hardwood aloft,
Vegetable matter smoking,undeveloped frontal lobes.
I climb the fence to the barn roof,jump into the sawdust below,
Rapid,rabid,rhythm...
The "white album" on the farm,"when I get to the bottom I go back to the top of the slide Where I stop and turn and go for a ride "
Bright eyed white light, toss the firecrackers into the shavings pile.
A boys smouldering thought in action,My thought.
Blue big loud red yellow rumble, real dragon flame.
Saddle horse sliding stop,Casey running to me,
Me.. slow to him.
Father,Son,A Dragging Spontaneous,Combustion...
Boot dust, boy and dad serious conversation,
Heading Rope dunked in the water trough,
Splattering water, nylon coils, on denim blue jean, pride.
My Hat in the dirt,
Daddies arm swinging,
Helter Skelter, a whipping to burn,
Real Dragon Flame smart in a memory.
Wholly bound, me and Casey.

Author's Note

Spontaneous Combustion..... Good Sounds....Memories.

Reviews

[Muse]

hmmm, this looked familiar. I have to agree, his poem was very inspiring. But I applaud you for taking inspiration and making it uniquely your own.

Blue big loud red yellow rumble, real dragon flame.
The view of a wet rope,dunked in the water trough,
Splattering water, nylon coils, on denim blue jean, pride.
Hat in the dirt,

dunno why...makes me think of good ol Iowa. :D

[lee von cleef]

John Wayne.....

[Steven]

It's like giving birth in barn straw. Man, I'm a new fav of yours.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

an idea smoldering under manure for days, incredibly different, fantastic write.

[Bare Trees]

I must admit I'm a real dummy when it comes to figuring out this type of advanced poetry. I would like to be able to write like this someday but for now...

It's very interesting though, very interesting.

[lee von cleef]

Ahh, Cuz you write better,I know it,Tank you for the gumball anyway,PS try The Devils Prize of mine.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I see you are winning here again with this graphically busy, process of father-son combustion, nice work, Lee

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hard to believe I inspired someone, coarse your creativity is superior to mine...

The smallest of ideas can become a realized dream but it will be a rollercoaster ride of emotions so fasten your seatbelt.

[lee von cleef]

You,The Beatles,Casey, three powerful forces in one poem,Kicking my coma se yama.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well color me flattered... what color is flattered? I mean green is envy, red is love and blue is sad.

[Southern Cross]

Flames,start small,
A idea,smouldering under manure for days," Combustion indeed !

[rnuff]

Wow powerful read

[WingsToFly]

Well that was quite a read. Good one.

[Sami Khalil]

Flames, start small... A true concept.