Long tearm consequences

Long tearm consequences

A Poem by lee von cleef
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my moms a oily bird

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Long term consequences

From ingesting this “Event”

If I survive this cleansing process,

I may live, but with permanent impairment

Blair’s radio tracking and banding is domain eminent

This should have a tremendous difference in her survival rating

I call the house but no one answers 

 

© 2012 lee von cleef


Author's Note

lee von cleef
My older sister pushed the family into a pool of oil.Conservator // Guardianship // Wealth -
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You weave such history and mystery into your family account... our choices and the consequences of those actions... Brilliant twists of fate.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You mean as in "Clampett OIL?" from the sticks to Hollywood with all the belongings?
Yes a very mysterious write even with the footnote...write more please...as the real writer you are, you have posed questions in your readers minds...

Posted 12 Years Ago


lee von cleef

12 Years Ago

Short story, I tried to compare the "legal" event to a bird caught in a oil spill,everyone want's t.. read more
Penlady

12 Years Ago

absolutely...family as in backbone....
this one has me truly curious...........mystifying. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


being dunked in a pool of oil would indeed have long-term consequences.

Posted 12 Years Ago


cryptic indeed..families can be slippery..

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 29, 2012
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