Tolvin ,Chaptor One

Contest poem

Mean spirited  perfume
Singed  eyes  and the steeds splendid stature
Their presence hidden by
The knight of Oblivion
Purer then glass
Yet,
He provided a mystical camouflage
a sky serene
Yes death
Tip toed for the two,
Unseen merciful madness    
L V C

Author's Note

Near the edge.....

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

mysterious ...........excellent verse.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, I like it as it has a dark twist....I would enter it! Just bring the second line words closer together. The description of mystical camouflage is different, and intriguing!

[lee von cleef]

Thank you again and again.