Thanks To You.

Something I thought of just listening to a song.

You were mine.

Until she took you away.

What did she have that I didn't have?

Looks, brains, personality difference?

She is better than me right?

Is that why you chose her?

Did she coax you or did You do it out of your own free will?

Either way...

You ripped my heart in two.

All thanks to You.

I've felt lonely ever since you left.

I took comfort in drowning in my sorrows.

People think I have a bad case of depression...

Nothing can get me out of this state.

All thanks to You.

I've cried so many tears since you left.

Stayed up all night,

Thinking of what could've been.

Held myself together, just in case my fragile self...

Fell apart.

All thanks to You.

I've had many guys asking me,

"Do you wanna go out?", "I like you, so um...maybe we could date?"

I declined all.

Afraid they would do the same thing You did.

Their hearts are all broken,

All thanks to You.

I've got so many things to say.

Do you know how hard it is to get over you?

Don't you know how hard I've tried to get you outta my mind?

It never got better as each day went by...

Now that you're gone... I've got nothing to lose.

All thanks to You.

It's a little too late, I'm a little too gone.

A little too tired of just hanging on.

I'm letting go while I'm still strong enough to, even though it's just too sad.

I'm a little too blue, It's a little too bad.

You were too good to be true,

It was all thanks to ME that I fell for you.

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

and all of this happened because of one person, I wonder what's so special about this personal now, must be something about him or else you wouldn't go crazy for it, the sense of desperation and sorrow could be felt from line to line, you've done well. I like the last line, it's like you decide that it's your own fault to fall in love even though you shouldn't have blame yourself..

[J.M]

Love this - very alive and descriptive. I especially like the way each stanza ends with 'you', then the last ends with 'me' - very effective.

[Adam :P]

good poem, real painful,

[The_Tom_Ward_Method.]

This is a very good poem. It's easy to relate to, and i can feel the painful, sorrowful emtions within it as i was reading.

good job.

[Hello, Goodbye]

impressive considering all aspects.

[stevon]

i love this [poem ,its really pitiful,but remember if you have something let it go,if its truly tours it will come back to you

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a truly relatable poem~ I think most of us have been in this situation at one point or another in life~ well expressed poetic~

[Machiavelli]

This is very easy to relate to

[closed]

Never let anyone or anything take away your happiness. You're worth more than they could ever define.

A captivating write


-Dream

[Sunflower 20]

great job! i love the strucure of this piece, escpecially how you ended each paragraph with the same line. Makes the whole thing very emotional.

[Queenofpenticales]

:"-O Really great!!! Amazballs!! Holyfloopowder?
ganing bake my mind this I can relate too and probly any one, I have been wanting to come across something that can some up some how, even thou I've been healing, its yeah...!
wheres the subscribing bu ten thingy you're great! :o)
( it takes a bit for me to be amazedballed,and i am!)
betuful wording and i like the ending rhythmic lines, wish this would be a real song. Even if the music would suck Id still listen to it just because of these lyrics.