Am

Am

A Poem by Count Humilus

Another Sunday’s resolution

Another 5 am

Another moment inhaled

Another story to yell

My mind in love with it’s justifications

Your self involved mind in love with broken mirrors

Shelters creak

I hear my night alive

I felt the room breaking

I feel this building aging as does my own heart

Sights of souls in windows

Slowing down my present

Fearing the pavement

Fearing unwanted eyes

Feeling flesh against bad odds

Finding unsuspecting love in a beat

Passing ourselves off as personas

We embrace the silent spectors

 

© 2010 Count Humilus


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oh well..how human are pretty weird ,yet you tell me again
suddenly one crazy day and all alone i just felt the craziness of it all
i loved how my mind rationalized it all,all thats is so silly and strange
i feared so he made it easy for me..you too fell in love with illusions
sometimes i imagine things,to go alive,things breting ,room getting old
like my aging bones
how i fear everything,even a touch i longed for a lot,still came unwanted
never expected it too soon..how silly..its not love ..though the heart did beat
its crazy all through ..yet my mind say its all makes some sense..still i never see
wonderful write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I could have continued reading this for hours
Thank you for sharing it

Posted 14 Years Ago


i feel your writing. and can get the imagery.

"My mind in love with it’s justifications
Your self involved mind in love with broken mirrors "

awesome. peace.


Posted 14 Years Ago


oh well..how human are pretty weird ,yet you tell me again
suddenly one crazy day and all alone i just felt the craziness of it all
i loved how my mind rationalized it all,all thats is so silly and strange
i feared so he made it easy for me..you too fell in love with illusions
sometimes i imagine things,to go alive,things breting ,room getting old
like my aging bones
how i fear everything,even a touch i longed for a lot,still came unwanted
never expected it too soon..how silly..its not love ..though the heart did beat
its crazy all through ..yet my mind say its all makes some sense..still i never see
wonderful write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Count Humilus