Closure Dose

Closure Dose

A Poem by Count Humilus
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Silence of me

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 Useless at night when slow motion starts to kick in

I doze at first light

My stomach cramping

Lamps shatter my sleep

I want to break the bulbs and stick the sharded piece in my aching calves

Smoke away the pain

Take a vitamin c and fish oil gel caplet

Weary of it potentially hurting my stomach

My anxiety snowballs

I let it avalanche on her memory

Never thought itd be the snow

But finally its over

© 2009 Count Humilus


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If I am comprehending and understand correctly, this is about a breakup that has gone arwy?
The emotion is very raw and I could see someone actually living this way. I really enjoyed it and wished there was more to read!



Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2009

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A Poem by Count Humilus